Desk Walnut
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 Walnut Reception Desk 10 Curved  US $2,199.00
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 5539 18 Walnut Geo Pedestal Desk US $538.69
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 Elegant Solid Wood Desk Walnut Brown by Walker Edison US $262.50
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 Elegant Solid Wood Desk W Hutch Walnut Brown by Walk US $347.50
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 Contemporary Desk Set in Walnut by Coaster 800783 US $271.19
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 COMPUTER DESK DARK WALNUT FINISH WOODFREE SHIPPING US $199.00
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 Series A Walnut 42 Corner Desk Bush Office Solutions US $254.10
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 Series A Walnut 60 Desk Bush Office Solutions WC2556 US $289.65
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 Latico Leathers Heritage Desk Memo Holder in Walnut 7543WAL US $50.99
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 Wildon Home Saginaw Computer Desk in Walnut and Black 7121 US $295.00
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 old walnut desk US $150.00
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 Presence Workstation Deluxe Computer Work Desk Black Walnut US $399.99
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 Trundle Desk by Offi Office Furniture High End Walnut US $1,499.00
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 Computer Desk Walnut Finish by Poundex F4245 US $112.50
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 Computer Desk Walnut Finish by Poundex F4247 US $125.61
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 Walnut Reception Desk 5 Curved US $1,199.00
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 walnut desk similar to crate and barrel US $300.00
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Really easy 10 points please?
The descriptive essay is on a walnut (seriously). Please rate and tell me if you have any suggestions. The descriptive paper is:
The object sits idly on a desk. It looks like a brain with a skull for a shell. The sun-kissed shell is as wrinkly as a grandma. It's shaped like a heart. It's as if it used to be a grand handsome actor but now he's just balding and wrinkling. It's like an orphan left to rot on the ground by its parents. But the hard rock-like shell helps it survive the fall.
The object is as smooth as a baby's butt. It feels as if there is a minature valley of rolling hills. Bumpy yet the silky grass keeps it smooth.
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Lmao - that was actually really good! 
The only thing I would change is the "wrinkling" from "... he's just balding and wrinkling." You use "wrinkling like a grandma" right before, so it just doesn't sound right. Other than that, I thought it was great!