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What do you think of this?
The man walked into the small cabin and sat down in the dusty recliner near the table. He took a deep breath, then looked at the others.
"Franks is dead."
One of them turned to him. "Dead?"
"Dead. I found him myself."
"What does this mean for us?"
"It means somebody knows what we're up to."
Jared crept away from the window and walked back to his beat up old Model T. He sent a quick text message to Samantha- "hld up at wrk, hon. ill b lat tonite." Pulling his AK-47 from inside, he snuck up to the door, kicked it in, and strode into the cabin. "That was the understatement of the year, Phil. I know what you're up to, alright. I know everything about it. And you won't get away with killing Detective Franks, either."
It has potential, I'll give you that. The first little part is good until we get to the part where the others react to the news of Franks' death. As a reader, I would suspect them to react a little more. More emotional rather than monotone, even if they don't like this Franks person. At least, that's what I'm getting from this piece.
The text talk isn't always the best thing to do. Don't make it that indecipherable or people will turn away from reading it. You can write a text, but make it reasonable. Taking out too much is a little difficult for a reader.
"Pulling his AK-47 from inside, he snuck up to the door, kicked it in, and strode into the cabin. "That was the understatement of the year, Phil. I know what you're up to, alright. I know everything about it. And you won't get away with killing Detective Franks, either.""
I'm confused about this part ^^^^^^^^^
Who's Phil? Why does he suddenly have his gun out? Strode into the cabin? I thought he was already in the cabin while texting Samantha that he would be late. You said Jared (is that the guy who told them Franks is dead?) went to the window.
Oh. Ohhhhh wait a sec. I get it now. Jared is spying on them. You might want to clear that up a little bit. Or maybe I'm just over tired. But yeah, make it a little clearer. At the beginning before you mention Jared, say something along the lines,
Jared watched them from the window, straining to hear everything that they were saying. The man who had just walked in was explaining what had happened and blah blah blah and then you get into the part. Just so you can make it clear.
The dialogue is good. But it seems almost robotic. Forced, especially what Jared is saying. And you don't need the very last comma.
Anyway, like I said, it's got potential. Just a little editing and polishing and you'll be well on your way. Happy writing!


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